I received mostly very positive feedback from my first elevator pitch. The people that commented on my assignment thought that I was very passionate about the mission and service that I was looking to provide to people, and they were impressed by the fact I was able to deliver a full elevator pitch without fumbling over words or anything like that. I would say that one thing that changed was that that feedback gave me the confidence to deliver what I thought was another successful elevator pitch. That being said, I think that I also did get a little ahead of myself in this pitch therefore was a little short when it came to the timing of the pitch.
Hey Michael, great job again with this elevator pitch! I can tell that you took the feedback from the last one to heart and made adjustments to make it the best elevator pitch possible. It is clear that you are informed on the topic and are passionate about what you are talking about. That is going to go a long way! Great job!
ReplyDeleteHey Michael!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this assignment. I will say you spelled ‘number’ wrong, but besides that, you did a great pitch! You spoke really strongly, and you can obviously tell the passion you had for your product. You used hand motions appropriately and had a great idea. You definitely spoke really professionally, and never mumbled, laughed, or stumbled over your words. Great job!